Monday, October 3, 2011

Letter to Casey

Dear Casey,
                      I read about your game ending strike out, you were in a tough position but here is what you should have done. I heard many people came to see this game of yours. It was at Village park and your team was Mudville right? And you were losing by 2. That is exposition when the conflict and the characters are introduced. 
First you got up to the plate and you were so confident with two outs. When the first pitch was
Delivered, Watched it go into the catcher’s glove. This is when the story begins to rise in action. Then you took strike two and got to angry this is when there was no turning back. This is the climax of this story. Next  you got pitch number 3 and you struck-out that is when the falling action occurred`. When the pitch gets to you, you strike out and the game is over and that is when the resolution happens. You should have controlled yourself. You may have had a hit or a walk if you didn't get so angry, and you could have won the game for your team. This is what you should have done Casey, you might have succeeded and you would have been the hero of the town, but you got angry and lost the game.

Sincerely,
                      Drew Barth

3 comments:

  1. It seems right, but there are many errors made. It is a good job overall though.

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  3. Your name should be in line with sincerely.

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