Once upon a time in a big town a little kindergarten playschool was in session. A little boy named Timothy wondered out in recess and found himself in the big city streets. When he realized that he was lost he cried for help then a white van came out of no where. The man in the Van said hi kid I recognize you are you lost and Timothy said yes. So he hopped into the van and drove off with the man. He seemed to vaguely remember him. When the teacher noticed Timothy was gone they went straight to the authorities. This was a curtail moment for him because the man in the van went to the Police station to turn in the boy when they got their the man got arrested right away.
When the trail happened little Timothy had to testify against the man and he said that he was just trying to help him out but the court didn't listen. He wanted the man to be innocent but he just couldn't persuade. The jury had a decision and it was guilty he felt terrible but then Timothy's mom came and said I know this man he would never to this he was just trying to help me out. Then the jury once again had a decision and said he is innocent. Everyone was okay and turns out the guy in the Van married his mom because his Dad died and everything turned out great.
Great story but check for some sentence fluency and grammar.
ReplyDeleteI liked the creativity. You should have read over it before posting. You did really well on your word choice.
ReplyDeleteI like the plot of the story and how realistic it is. But you should read over your work and edit it. But this could be good if you edited this.
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